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“It's a lot easier to be lost than found. It's the reason we're always searching and rarely discovered--so many locks not enough keys.”
-Sarah Dessen

"Happiness doesn't come from doing what you like, but rather, loving what you do."
-Becca & Scott (JC & AC)


Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Twists and Turns

 Author's Note: This piece is what I used for my Writing Assessment. Please comment!

 
Life. A strange, peculiar, phenomenal gift; full of love, friendships, smiles, laughter… decisions. Life.  A web of lies, a quilt of regret, a book of tragedy. Life. A maze of right and wrong, left and right, yes and no’s. Life… a maze.

Questions fill every minute of every day. What should I wear tomorrow? Should I go to basketball practice tonight? Can I stay home from school today? You think so? Should I date him? Should I ask her out? Are you sure? Should I do drugs? Is this safe? What college should I go to? Will you marry me? Should we take her off life support? Should I risk others’ lives to save mine? Every question has an answer. These answers are what make up your maze. These are the paths of yes and no, sure and whatever, I do and  I don’t. These questions are the foundation of your maze.

Every decision we make in life leads us to a consequence. Every decision we make in life elongates our maze, complicates our maze. Every decision we make in life determines the future. If you come to a crossed road, you’ve got two choices. Left or right. Theoretically, a fifty percent chance of choosing the right path. Theoretically, a fifty percent chance of choosing the wrong path.  The thing is, even if we make the wrong decision, and we realize our mistake before further progressing, we can backtrack and try to undo what has been done. We can start over on the right trail. If you have the attitude of “Oh, I’m perfect and I don’t make mistakes,” well, good luck getting to the end of your maze.  Good luck getting past that dead end just in front of you that you fail to see.

Whether or not you choose wisely, it is important that you learn from your experiences. That you are able to say; “Alright, drinking when I am fifteen isn’t such a good idea, I should have said ‘no.’” Not only is it vital to learn something from these encounters, it is necessary for a successful trip through the maze to put that newly found knowledge to use. Next time you run into a similar situation, you can say “No way, not again,” instead of trying it “just one more time.”

Through the road of surprises, death, enchantment, mistakes, fluttery throats, flopping stomachs, loving hearts, it is important that we realize where we are heading in our maze. Learn from your experiences. Question the future. Live life to its fullest. Life. A web of lies, a quilt of regret, a book of tragedy.
Life.
A maze.

3 comments:

  1. I love this essay! It's realistic and true, and I love the questions in the beginning, I can completely relate! Although, (not sure if you want feedback since I already know you did phenomenal!)your points within the piece could've been more organized. Meaning, each middle paragraph that states "why" could've had just one reason why life is a maze. It's not really a big deal though... Can't wait to read more pieces!
    P.S. Love the new blog theme! <3

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  2. Oh! I like that way of organizing it... I did organize this piece, just a little differently than usual-- the first body paragraph is about the questions being the foundation of the maze, the second being about the consequences of your decisions, and the third about learning from your mistakes. Kinda weird, but I liked it... :P

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    1. No, no! I get it now! I'm just super picky about formatting, that's my favorite part of editing :)

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