When you stare at me my heart flutters to my throat,
When you respond I smile.
Your laugh sings in my head all day and night,
But why don't you stand up?
I know that I am not what is wanted,
I know we could not be.
Your face melting through my thoughts,
What is wrong here?
So what am I feeling, friendship or more?
So which do I listen to, my heart or my head?
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ReplyDeleteSecond time I read this. it's so amazing. One of my favorites of your pieces, with your If one...
ReplyDeleteI don't know how to explain it, but I understand this piece. I get a feeling, one that I'm so used to, when I read this.
ReplyDeleteI think it is a feeling every person (girls for sure) has experienced at some point in their life... Honestly, I think that it is normal!
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ReplyDeleteThis is still one of the poems on your blog that I like the best.
ReplyDeleteUm, in my opinion, I agree with Marissa. It's good and provokes a certain feeling but it kind of cliche, like it's been done before. But I still really liked it...
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