I wish someone had
told me,
How it was going to
be.
Once life had gone,
The same old song,
Maybe I'd have a
chance.
Maybe.
I wish someone had
told me,
The day sitting
under the tree.
All the hurt, all
the pain,
The never ending
game.
Maybe I'd have a
chance.
Maybe.
I wish someone had
told me,
That it wasn't going
to be alright.
That life isn't
perfect.
And neither am I.
Maybe I'd have a
chance.
Maybe.
Just add this to the list of amazing poems!!!! Great job! :) just maybe.... Make it a little longer next time. I want a story in a poem sometimes. Like the raven! Make one like that for me!! Thanks<333
ReplyDeleteThanks! Anyway, each line of this poem has a purpose... the symbolism isn't as obvious though...
DeleteThanks for the challenge too, I'll work on that after my DWA pieces!