Walking outside, feeling the cool crisp air biting at my skin,
Collapsing into that sea of soft, grass, just surrounding me in an open field.
My flowing golden brown hair caressing my face.
Gazing up at that black canvas stretched above me, with those jewels shining down on me,
Sighing, in amazement and wonder,
My breath making a mist.
Millions of eyes watching me from above,
Just watching from heaven.
Staring, staring at that black fog above me, for what seems like only a second in time,
Blink.
And in a seconds time the gems disappear.
Leaving me alone with a rising sun and miles and miles of blue sky.
Night is done.
Day has come.
Stars.
I really love your word choice but I would keep your ending a little simpler and just end with "Day Has Come." Ending on Stars kind of confused me
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