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“It's a lot easier to be lost than found. It's the reason we're always searching and rarely discovered--so many locks not enough keys.”
-Sarah Dessen

"Happiness doesn't come from doing what you like, but rather, loving what you do."
-Becca & Scott (JC & AC)


Wednesday, February 13, 2013

Shatter


Millions of them, falling, falling, to the ground. The eyes, the horrible, horrible, eyes mocking perhaps, what we would call a mirror. The delicate glass floats in the air—a portal to our past—a dangerous trap, that one.  They attempt to lure us to the dark side, and they will, unless we wait, wait, for them to… shatter.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         
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  1. Riah VFebruary 15, 2013 at 7:52 AM

    This piece was very short, sweet, and to the point. It has really good sentence structure and word choice. The only suggestion I have is maybe to add some other sensory details besides just what you saw; maybe what the sharp, piercing sound. But great piece1

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  2. MarissaLFebruary 15, 2013 at 10:19 AM

    One thing that you do, not just in this piece, but in every piece is you always have great symbolism, and you can easily make your own interpretations. I like how you use the dash constructions. Honestly, there is nothing I would change.

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